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[2023/10/28]ThechartbelowshowsthewaterlevelsinreservationsinsixcitiesinAustraliainOctober2009andOctober2010.
【主体段分段】：按照时间分段
【开头段】
ThebarchartcomparessixAustraliancitiesintermsofwaterlevelsofreservoirsinOctober2009andOctober2010.
【概述段】
Overall,Brisbanehadthehighestwaterlevelofreservoiramongallthecitiesinbothyears.Also,exceptthewaterlevelinSydney,thefiguresinalltheotherfivecitiesshowedarisingtrend.
思路要点：
-Brisbane的水库水位两年都最高
-除了Sydney，其他城市的水位都上升
【Body1】
In2009,thewaterlevelinBrisbanerankedthetopamongthesecities(98%),followedbythefigureinPerth(80%)andthatinMelbourne(78%).Bycontrast,thewaterlevelinDarwinwasthelowest(36%),whichwasroughlyhalfofthefigureinGoldCoast.
思路要点：2009年
-Brisbane水位排第一，Perth和Melbourne分别排名第二、第三
-Darwin水位最低，大约是GoldCoast的一半
【Body2】
Inthesubsequentyear,thereemergedamarginalgrowthby2%inthewaterlevelsofreservoirsinBrisbane,PerthandDarwin.ThewaterlevelsinMelbourneandGoldCoastalsoexperiencedanupwardtrend,withthefiguresrisingconsiderablyby5%.Bycontrast,Sydneywastheonlycitywherethewaterlevelofreservoirdroppedsignificantlyfrom44%in2009to40%in2010.
思路要点：2010年
-Brisbane,PerthandDarwin的水位小幅度上升
-Melbourne和GoldCoast的水位显著上升
-只有Sydney的水位显著下降
